I actually found a better replacement for the Old Kite with the Running Rabbit (fBfR).
Thankfully, this is the last time I will need to make any changes.
Here are all the errors I found in your draft:
Piece Movement/Promotion/Drop Errors
Old Kite should be replaced with Running Rabbit, which slides in any forward direction (fBfR)
For Pawn, Lance, Ram's-Head Soldier, Running Rabbit (currently Old Kite), Knight, Flying Swallow, White's promotion is always forced, while Black's promotion is never forced
When captured, White Kirin is not being placed in Black's hand
Board Setup Errors
White King and White Great Elephant are swapped from where they should be in the initial setup.
Other
The grid seems a little off, but you probably already knew that.
I actually found a better replacement for the Old Kite with the Running Rabbit (fBfR).
Thankfully, this is the last time I will need to make any changes.
Here are all the errors I found in your draft:
Piece Movement/Promotion/Drop Errors
Old Kite should be replaced with Running Rabbit, which slides in any forward direction (fBfR)
For Pawn, Lance, Ram's-Head Soldier, Running Rabbit (currently Old Kite), Knight, Flying Swallow, White's promotion is always forced, while Black's promotion is never forced
When captured, White Kirin is not being placed in Black's hand
Board Setup Errors
White King and White Great Elephant are swapped from where they should be in the initial setup.
Other
The grid seems a little off, but you probably already knew that.